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Mellow gold that slips
from hands to cups,
from spoons to bread;

ancient coin when times were young,
and Nature had power,
and Gods took it with ambrosia and wine.

Little bees work hard
to create this amber nectar,
with flowers of every kind
as mates to fill the hive.

And to have sweet dreams,
be sure of this,
honey and milk it's the perfect mix!
©2008-2009 ~xCamix
:iconxcamix:

Author's Comments

work for *Writers-Workshop!
I missed the last one, and I'm terribly sorry of that. But school is the most important thing, and I had to study!

Anyway... this time the purpose was to write something to teach/explain, with poetry. You can choose an important fact of your life, great events, even encyclopedia voice! So, I thought "Why not?" and I looke on Wikipedia. And I thought about honey! That I think is one of the best thing in the world!
So, here is the page: [link]

What I wanted to convey:
- his distinctive qualities (how it looks, tastes, etc.)
- the ancient production and relevancy in ancient time
- something about bees and their work

I know this isn't really a wonderful work (I'm not satisfied...). It's kinda weird. But this is all I can do now by now, 'cause of my school homeworks.

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:icondoublesigma:
Hai rispettato perfettamente tutti i punti!
E ne vien fuori una cosa davvero simpatica, a mio parere. :D

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"I'm not afraid of computers taking over the world. They're just sitting there. I can hit them with a two by four"
:iconxcamix:
Grazie mille :glomp:

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:iconsaddy4:
dopo aver accuratamente traddotto tutto: bellaaaaaaa!:D :D :D :D :D :D
:iconxcamix:
Grazie :aww:

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› ¤ ‡ Camilla ‡ ¤ ‹

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:iconbeatlesfreak:
Wow your english has really improved, I like your imagery in this poem. And very good use of adjectives. :)

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon
:iconxcamix:
Thank you very very much! :hug:

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› ¤ ‡ Camilla ‡ ¤ ‹

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:iconsamjaymc:
Lovely explanation of honey. Keep it coming.
:iconxcamix:
Thank you very much :aww:

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› ¤ ‡ Camilla ‡ ¤ ‹

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:iconbeatlesfreak:
You're very welcome:blowkiss:

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon

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