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Like a wonderful, fragile butterfly
You’re dancing around me with your white, soft dress
And if you will go away from me I’ll die
Because I can’t live without you, my mistress.

Your hair had stolen all the colours of the wood,
And first they’re close to me, and then far away
So while the music is playing, I understood
I love your smell, it’s like a flower of May…

And seems to me that your deep, dark, shining eyes
Are burning like an untouchable great star:
And I feel like they are never the same twice
And every gaze from you left on me a scar.

And my only desire now is you and me,
Dancing here, dancing like this through all the year,
Stop the world and stay, caring for each other, and be,
Simply be, ‘cause I love you so much my dear…
©2007-2009 ~xCamix
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Author's Comments

Workshop for *Writers-Workshop
This time, the request is to write an Ekphrastic poem (to know what is an ekphrastic, go here ---> [link])

I try to go Inside the paint (that is one I totally love, "The dance in the city" by Renoir), try to be a part of it, and feel what they were feeling, or better, what I think they were feeling...
So, I wrote this piece. I wrote it like the man is talking to the woman, like he is trying to explain his Love.

I kept the pic from this site: [link]
If there are any kind of copyright, they goes to the owner.

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:icontheheartseeker:
whaow veryyy nice :clap:

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:iconxcamix:
thank you very very much :aww:

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:icontheheartseeker:
your welcome again;)

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:icondoublesigma:
OMG! Bellissimissimissima! :+fav:

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:iconxcamix:
wow grazie millissimissimissime!!! >/////<

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:iconnoelany:
*si commuove*
Pure in rima. Sei indecente :heart:
:iconxcamix:
Grazie *.* Sono sinceramente commossa pure io... :heart:
:hug:

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i think you got his heart.

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Yes I am Christian,
Yes i am Gothic,
God made both the light and the dark,
and Loves them equally!

~DisabilityArt
:iconxcamix:
thank you very very much!

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yw

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Yes I am Christian,
Yes i am Gothic,
God made both the light and the dark,
and Loves them equally!

~DisabilityArt

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